The Entirety Of Your Kiss

02 Feb


How soft, in deepest hunger,
your lips do play upon mine,
that e’en with a lightest kiss,
your eyes do ‘ere fall silent;
and I, now breathless bound,
bear the weight of your lips,
that, with their full embrace,
shall my breath be exhumed;
and in your hands, this warm,
holding our fingers entwined,
we become lost to ourselves,
‘ere only as one, are we alive.


Posted by on February 2, 2016 in My Poetry



3 responses to “The Entirety Of Your Kiss

  1. theweavr

    February 2, 2016 at 6:01 am

    Perfect and nothing more. The flow and meter of this piece is exquisite. The passion and feeling is beyond anything I have ever experienced. Wonderfully done! Thank you for sharing! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • Daniel J. Antil

      February 2, 2016 at 6:52 am

      Thank you, most humbly and most sincerely! Such kind and generous praise is my greatest reward!

      Liked by 1 person

      • theweavr

        February 2, 2016 at 6:55 am

        Welcomed to the core of my being! Such exquisiteness is rare, indeed.



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